Room

Drawing \ Architecture | 02/14/08 @081 | esfed | critiques (9) | views (286)

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Its a backgropund for a web, it to the contact seccion, that the reason from the phone in the front : ).
More that anything critic because i dont use to do things liker this! now i gonna do more things like this to practice ^^

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Comments (9)

zymyint

02/14/08 @389

Awson! i like the ground texture n shadows

emagery

02/14/08 @586

very ikea, hehe

purplerose

02/15/08 @502

Cool work.

esfed

02/15/08 @594

thanks people!

Madanapale

02/15/08 @786

Nice drawing, good perspective.
Carlos

Daykan

02/15/08 @807

Really great perspective!!
Muy buen trabajo!!!

esfed

02/16/08 @889

thanks again! its mi first architec painting thanks for comments!

Phos

02/18/08 @951

the objects have great perspectives as I had to double check and make sure it wasn't 3D. the perspective is what makes this work so well, imo, anyway. for myself, I don't like to use provided for textures --assuming that you have done so here

-- so a thot would be to learn how to create your own textures for whatever apps you're using. forgive me if I'm wrong

. very well done!
*/9

DigitalDust

02/20/08 @968

"More than anything crit..."

OK. While most everything is falling properly on your vanishing points, the telephone device is not. It looks as if it's totally separate from the rest of the room. It needs to follow the same vanishing points as he room, or have it's own within the context/perspective of the space rendered.

Likewise, the left side of the computer desk looks raised while the right side has not been rendered on such an acute angle. It looks like it is twisted from left to right. Unless it was intentional, it looks awkward.

The vase is awkwardly place on the table. Not aesthetically pleasing with all the tangent angles.

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